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Also, Matt was great in talking to her during the shoot, making her say things...A nice touch. All in all, very inventive. Let's have more like it. For role play, Lexi could be a naked prisoner in a Women's Special Prison, and Matt the guard. Use the Kink jail-cell set...It's be terrific. And she should be shy and embarrassed at first, asking please-please for clothes...No! is the answer. :)

I agree with almost everyone: this was a great shoot. The role-play of prisoner was terrific, and Lilly was beautiful. There are scenes in the shoot right out of the famous Pachard graphic novels. I would actually like to see *more* dungeon/prison scenarios. They are very dramatic, and drama is the essence of bdsm. This was a terrific shoot. More work along these lines, Kink!

The set in the cage was very hot: a beautiful and totally nude girl in a cage really works for me. And I happen to know that what gets lovely feisty Jade really going (and upset) is not so much impact play, which she likes, but real humiliation. Hope days 2, 3, and 4 will have some of that. It's the key to her psyche.

Oh, yeah--and in the "climax" scene where Sabrina is kneeling and nude with her butt in the air and the lit candle in it, as Mark eats his dinner "by candlelight", she finds there is another naked girl on the other side of Mark, submissively on her knees, head down to the ground andher butt in the air, and with a THICKER lit candle lit in her ass! Then Mark takes the candle out of "Slavegirl A" and fucks her as Sabrina watches--and she begs for HER turn! A nice ending, so to speak... :)

Sabrina is great, and so were the candles. But a simple plot would have made this spicier: Mark wants Sabrina to take a candle up her ass and, naked and kneeling with her butt up, to serve him at a "candle-lit" birthday dinner. She refuses--it's too gross! He punishes her. And punishes her. Finally, she submissively knees, gets the candle up her ass, it's lit, she gives him a bj, and then knees humbly and naked at his feet with her butt up in the air and the lit candle up her ass, as he eats his dinner. Her chin is covered in his cum. Occasionally he leans down to give her a bit of food from his plate...

For myself, images 181, 182 and 184, though similar, are classics BDSM: a beautiful chained naked girl against a dark brick wall, with an iron-barred grated "window" to indicate the dungeon!

On Delilah's four day Training: 1. She is locked every night in that little windowless wooden cupboard. 2. She is not allowed to bathe, she must do some naked rock-shifting which will make her sweaty, and she is told she smells 3. She must wear an Anal Trainer three hours a day in the morning, starting with a thin, cigar-shaped one and working her way wider and longer. It should be a vibe, so we can hear the faint buzzing. 4. She must wear a penis-gag Mouth Trainer two hours every afternoon. It could be a pump-gag: and every time she giggles, the pump is pumped and the shaft in her mouth expands. 5. She is of course kept always nude. 6. She is taken around the Armory on hands-and-knees on a chain-leash, from station to station. her wrists and ankles are chained. 7. In the evening, every evening, she must list her mistakes. After each mistakes--two of the cane. 8. Then she is allowed to give a blow-job, and get fucked. 9. Then she is taken on hands and knees, dirty, smelly, covered with drying cum, back to the cupboard for the night. 10. I think that soon Dee will be taking a more serious attitude towards things! :) AEW

Marty, for more ideas from aewriter in prison settings, email me at aewriter@comcast.net. It's okay for this addy to be public..