The Upper Floor Presents Punishing Zoey With Bianca Breeze & Zoey Monroe
Hogtied - Inescapable Bondage and Brutal Orgasms

Comments made by aewriter

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May 1, 2009

photo image 122 is a classic of bdsm; 121 is nice as well. The luxurious set is nice, sort of Story of O. We should alternative such sets with dungeons and cell-block sets (but don't forget those!) I generally like head-hoods (punishment-hoods) with a nude girl, it can be a very dramatic contrast, but for me, this hood was too distorting. Nude girls cleaning a luxurious office, as in the terrific "Servant Keen" is a nice touch.

Sex And Submission
Apr 18, 2009

MARTY, contact me at aewriter2@yahoo.com re suggestions for the 2-girl prison-scene! AEW

Sex And Submission
Apr 12, 2009

Dear Marty, I'm having trouble logging in at the forum, but here's a storyline idea for 2 girls in the prison: Two girls: They are both naked, in adjoining wire-mesh cages. Girl A expressed fear of what is going to be done to her. The Guard comes, and drags her out of the cage. He inspects her—mouth, pussy, bend-over for anus. “STOP That!”, cries the girl B. “Shut up or you will get a Punishment!” Then he binds nude Girl A to the pole for a Punishment with the whip. “This will happen to you everyday you are in the Prison!”, he tells the girl. The other girl protests: “She’s innocent! She was only protesting the government policy on women’s rights!’ "YOU have the right to be nude and kept as a sex-slave!', laughs the Guard. And now he dragged naked Girl B from her cell. You can imagine what follows...

Sex And Submission
Apr 11, 2009

The "prison" set in the first part ("Hands Back") is very dramatic and should be used again: those series of wire-mesh cages. What would have made this first scene even better was another naked girl in the next cage over, watching Mark and Ceclia with wide eyes... :)

Sex And Submission
Apr 5, 2009

I want to emphasize that the camera-work WAS great, the dark and the water should definitely be kept. It was very well done! But all darkness should not be done all the time. Variation in setting is good and DON'T DON'T give up the dungeon-settings! In fact, make the dungeon and jail-cell settings more explicit and clear. But a chained and naked girl in a luxurious office? Nice!

Sex And Submission
Apr 4, 2009

And as long as I'm gassing off, I think that if people look at Derek and Alana, several months ago, in the photo-section called "Steel", you'll see how something very dramatic can be done in a dungeon-setting bj! Chains (as in the Alana shoot) are usually more dramatic than rope. More chains, then (And how "story of O" dramatic would a heavily-chained and naked girl be in a luxurious office or house-setting, eh? The Alana shoot was Jan. 2008...I'd take some inspiration from the last scene...

Sex And Submission
Apr 4, 2009

Marty, it DID look great, and with the water! Don't change that sort of thing. I am in favor of some non-dungeon settings (esp. to create "Story of O" environments) but also I think I was reflecting people's desire to see MORE specifically dungeon (and prison-cell) settings, rather than simply darkness. My own preference: nude and with bare feet (not heels)--it creates a total vulnerability. Also: some signs of sweat. Sweat, like drool (and pussy-lubrication) is a sign of a girl's loss of control over her naked body. Very dramatic.

Sex And Submission
Apr 4, 2009

The girl is pretty, and very willing. And the dark photography is dramatic, and bdsm is all about drama. But I agree with a lot of people that this set could've been really spectacular with a more imaginative theme: dungeon or jail-cell. Bring those dramatic settings back! Though with the "Servant Keen" video, where she's nude and dusting the office, before dusting the Master, I also liked the naked-girl-in-the-lavish-office set: a bit of "Story of O" there. But again--that's drama. Let's have more dramatic settings put up on this fine site.

Sex And Submission
Feb 7, 2009

I absolutely love Kristine's innocence and pure beauty--and her passion and submissiveness. But I think the glasses are distracting. Others will find them intriguing, I suppose.

The Training Of O
Jun 21, 2008

In my opinion, Charlotte is one of the most beautiful models TTOO has ever had. A lovely, expressive face, elegant hair (elegantly disarranged), lovely real tits and ass: her body is real. I look forward to more strenuous training for her (let's see her sweaty and moaning), but this is a great start. A lovely, lovely girl.

The Training Of O
Mar 10, 2008

I didn't know librarians had rings through their nipples!

Device Bondage
Dec 22, 2007

Terrific scenes of Devaun nude on all fours on a leash! It really works for me!

The Training Of O
Dec 16, 2007

One of the best shoots ever. Denise is very beautiful, cute, and convincing when she says "Sir," "Master," and--after he comes in her eager sweet mouth, "Thank you..." A terrific shoot!

Sex And Submission
Nov 24, 2007

An absolutely wonderful sequence! Savannah is terrific and the basic premise of the entire shoot is a great, gritty idea (as d-54 says). Let's see more of this setting! A naked girl chained to a stone wall in a grim cage, the Master's cum already smeared on her face, fearfully expecting...who knows what next? Wonderful. Let's have MORE of this dramatic setting!

Sex And Submission
Nov 3, 2007

Madison's pale-white skin and red-golden hair are absolutely beautiful. No tan for her--she is a milk-white slavegirl kept nude inside the house! But LOSE the SHOES!

The Training Of O