Comments made by aewriter

Marty, that was great--to see one's basic idea actualized in a posting was terrific! Harp's plot was good too. And I think this is an idea we can play with again...There are a lot of possibilities... ;)

photo image 122 is a classic of bdsm; 121 is nice as well. The luxurious set is nice, sort of Story of O. We should alternative such sets with dungeons and cell-block sets (but don't forget those!) I generally like head-hoods (punishment-hoods) with a nude girl, it can be a very dramatic contrast, but for me, this hood was too distorting. Nude girls cleaning a luxurious office, as in the terrific "Servant Keen" is a nice touch.

Dear Marty, I'm having trouble logging in at the forum, but here's a storyline idea for 2 girls in the prison: Two girls: They are both naked, in adjoining wire-mesh cages. Girl A expressed fear of what is going to be done to her. The Guard comes, and drags her out of the cage. He inspects her—mouth, pussy, bend-over for anus. “STOP That!”, cries the girl B. “Shut up or you will get a Punishment!” Then he binds nude Girl A to the pole for a Punishment with the whip. “This will happen to you everyday you are in the Prison!”, he tells the girl. The other girl protests: “She’s innocent! She was only protesting the government policy on women’s rights!’ "YOU have the right to be nude and kept as a sex-slave!', laughs the Guard. And now he dragged naked Girl B from her cell. You can imagine what follows...

I want to emphasize that the camera-work WAS great, the dark and the water should definitely be kept. It was very well done! But all darkness should not be done all the time. Variation in setting is good and DON'T DON'T give up the dungeon-settings! In fact, make the dungeon and jail-cell settings more explicit and clear. But a chained and naked girl in a luxurious office? Nice!

Marty, it DID look great, and with the water! Don't change that sort of thing. I am in favor of some non-dungeon settings (esp. to create "Story of O" environments) but also I think I was reflecting people's desire to see MORE specifically dungeon (and prison-cell) settings, rather than simply darkness. My own preference: nude and with bare feet (not heels)--it creates a total vulnerability. Also: some signs of sweat. Sweat, like drool (and pussy-lubrication) is a sign of a girl's loss of control over her naked body. Very dramatic.

I absolutely love Kristine's innocence and pure beauty--and her passion and submissiveness. But I think the glasses are distracting. Others will find them intriguing, I suppose.

I didn't know librarians had rings through their nipples!

One of the best shoots ever. Denise is very beautiful, cute, and convincing when she says "Sir," "Master," and--after he comes in her eager sweet mouth, "Thank you..." A terrific shoot!